A friend of mine made a paysite, asked to evaluate, please tell what first page design is better from your point, and what do you think about a whole thing:
http://www.xnest.com/1/
http://www.xnest.com/2/
http://www.xnest.com/3/
I also appreciate if you point to any stylistic or grammatic mistakes in English inscriptions. I'm not good enough in English to find possible errors.