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Old 11-02-2006, 07:10 PM  
Jace
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Originally Posted by BV View Post
review mine please:
i know they are not great but I would like to know what would make them better.

thanks,
BV

http://www.beachmodel.com/webmasters/index.php

Example: http://www.beachmodel.com/free_galle...c=l&disp_num=0
hey BV

One of the big problems there is with your feed is there is NO links in the post itself, so when I push that feed into wordpress, the only thing that shows up is a picture and a line of text, not one single link for the surfer to click on. Now, you will say, "the title is the link"....yes, it is, BUT what happens when people are using permalinks in wordpress, is that the title of the post in the feed gets changed into the title of the permalink, see here for example:

http://amateur.adailyfix.com/2006/10/30/bikini-fun/

when that feed got basically the same thing you are offering, except everything in that feed is linked to the landing page from the sponsor

think about it from a blog owners point of view, do you want one single thing clickable, or do you want everything clickable so that the surfer can click anything and get to the site? that way there is no chance of the surfer clicking something, not going anywhere, and moving on

The pics are good size though, if you can include a large image that would be rocking, but that image size is fine, but if you can include a full sized image that is maybe 450px wide that is linked to the gallery, that would ROCK...
and the text line should be linked to the gallery
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