Jace

thanks for the opportunity to pick your work apart! haha

http://www.kittysdiary.com/wp-rss2.php?nats=MjoyOjE
This is a nice blog feed, great text with a link at the end of each post directing the surfer to check out the site, everything a feed should be...except for one thing, more images, maybe you could include 1-2 images with every post relating to what the post was about...you do have images with a few posts, but they are pretty small, and since this is a blog feed and not a tgp, you can include a larger image, possibly as wide as 400px, without anyone bitching, but I would go 350px wide just to be safe. I would also have her link some of the text in the blog posts itself, like this sexy outfit, but that is just a little extra thing to get surfers to click, not all that important
Overall 9/10

http://www.septembersdiary.com/wp-rss2.php?nats=MjoyOjM
This feed uses the same format as above, so I would say the exact same thing about it that I said about the one above
Overall 9/10