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Okay, here is my critical view of things:
1 - the colors of the logos, cherries, etc are all too muted and dull. Nothing stands out. The site isn't vibrant looking, it looks very washed out.
2 - the second girl you feature, the images are not very vibrant either. A blonde waifish girl with no tan wearing black on a black and white bed is dull city. Maybe a nice photoset, but it isn't exciting to look at.
3 - No tag line. What are you selling here? Right that the top, say something, anything... "First time net girls getting wild!" ... anything that gives you site an instant identity. Right now it is very wishy-washy, hard to determine exactly what you site is about - especially getting that message out "above the fold" ie: above where the screen would scroll for most people.
overall, the site is muted, the colors are washed out, the girls pictures are not "hot", and generally I can't say from looking at your site what it is really about, except "another site with naked girls".
Good lick with it.
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