The camera man needs to be shot! For a competition like that you need to be professional as fuck. Yes, it is your wife and I know you're happy and she was wonderful,
but you need a pro photographer/media specialist to make a pro cut for your submission. (Sorry, but I'm like Simon Cowell...straight up and try not to care as much for your feelings.)
Oh, and I agree with this guy 100%%%
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Originally Posted by canadianbusiness.com
Sean says:
While I like her (and the dog's) enthusiasm, I really think Leah did herself a disservice with this pitch.She has a real product, a real market, and real packaging, yet her pitch falls down for not covering the basics (ex. she never really pushed her differentiated attributes) and reading it doesn't help.The whiteboard was a great idea, but can't be read.This pitch should be upgraded and resubmitted, I'd hate to see a great idea get lost because of weak pitch.
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