It seems like a very good idea. But I would make it a little clearer what it does and what the features, advantages and benefits are.
Take a little bit of the space from explaining what a download is and give iit to explaining what they save by downloading it.
Then get rid of the over aged girl on the front. She is 10 years pass her sell by date and was not so hot when she was younger. I can't even remember her name.
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