04-25-2007, 10:49 AM
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Originally Posted by PRGraveyard
Thanks for stopping by our thread. We stopped by one of your threads; we enjoyed our visit:
"I know he is a relative but..." - that implies it is bad to be your relative.
"...have to say that is work is really amazing." - how about his work is really amazing.
"His lighting, composition, depth of field, pov, focus points, etc are true art." - consider this: His combined use of lighting, composition, depth of field, point of view, and focus points create stunning images.
"he is located in the midwest, can travel anywhere or shoot locally." - he should be He. Let's turn his geographical status into a benefit: Based in the midwest, he is centrally located and can travel to any shoot location.
"If you are interested or want some samples, post here or hit me up." - We think this sounds better: If you are looking for a professional photographer, please contact me. Samples are available upon request.
"If I ever get an adult site built of my own, I would use him for my content hands down." - This implies you are considering your own solo site. If this is not true, a small change would be in order: If I had a site that needed custom or exclusive content, he would be my first and only choice of photographer.
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That is fine but this was a post on gofuckyourself. not a press release - but ok, thanks
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