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Lethal · 01-12-2003, 09:02 PM

Much improved.

Still feels like you need more of a realistic storyline, add more character/introduce your fictional persona and talk to the surfer rather than just describing the scenarios. Make the thumbs bigger and brighter.

01-12-2003, 09:02 PM
Lethal Confirmed User Join Date: Jan 2003 Posts: 494	Much improved. Still feels like you need more of a realistic storyline, add more character/introduce your fictional persona and talk to the surfer rather than just describing the scenarios. Make the thumbs bigger and brighter.