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Originally Posted by AlmightyJim
Hey rapmaster your Characters and Setting were great for an adult scene but it is a very common one. I think it was the lack of a descriptive Action sequence that we missed.
Hey testpie your scene had some GREAT imagination but it kind of crossed over into the fantasy realm with the talking dog. It would take some good special effects to pull this off.
Thanks again to everyone for participating!
 Sorry Bama but the contest ended at midnight last night but I've got to say that was a damn good variation with a twist on the Farmer's Daughter theme.
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Heh alright, well thanks for the tip. I've never written any substantive adult stuff before, although I have done a few screenplays
Fun contest, hope there's something like it again in the future