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Originally Posted by RawAlex
It generally looks nice, but there are a couple of issues...
First off, the models all move at the same lazy speed. During the intro the girls head is moving up and down and around at a constant pace. Humans don't do it. It breaks the illusion right away.
Second one would be the lips to penis contact area. That just didn't seem to be working out very well.
I also have the same flat light opinion that the hose had - the lack of shadows is very offputting. Real life always has at least some shadows, no matter how hard the lighting guys work. Light comes from somewhere, and goes somewhere. It doesn't emanate from everything in every direction. Yeah, it would probably up the render times, but well placed lighting and shadows would move this from 'darn good' to 'fucking hot'. Considering how cheap dual processor machines are these days, you could easily boost a render farm for not very much money at all.
Overall, it looks great - just those few things to make it amazing.
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I appreciate the constructive criticism. To be fair to our artists, this was our first 3 person talking clip, so there were no doubt going to be some tradeoffs. I don't really see the shadow thing as a negative, but I will mention it to the artists (render time is not a problem). Some of our artists make em screw slowly, but some are able to really get em banging. Here is a 2 person clip from our site
http://thrillbang.com, where they get banging pretty quickly.
30 second clip
Thanks Alex for checking it out, and stay tuned, as we are constantly improving.
