Heres the best advice I can give anyone building sites.
Act like a very horny male surfer thats in a big hurry to find 'quick' access to 'quality' porn. Act like a surfer that has no time for pretty things or reading text. Act like a surfer that will close down your website and move onto another in the blink of an eye. NOW in this state goto
http://www.HardcoreHotel.com
And surf your site as that dumb horny hurried surfer
I hope that helps...
Good luck.
Matt