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Originally Posted by AlienQ
?We are really having fun with Internext this year. If you thought are girls at Xbiz where hot, wait until you see the Florida crew. Keep an ear out for some big announcements from CE Cash coming soon.? Says MikeG of CECash. ?Webmasters will be making more money than ever with CE Cash!?
Grammar.
"If you thought are girls" should be, "our"
"Xbiz where hot" Not "where" its "were".
I like ya Lori, I really do but ya goto work on this stuff a little more than jumpin out of the shower and pulling a press release out from yer ass.
Numerous little strange errors in that release it makes my eyes buggy.
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while I appreciate your constructive criticism AlienQ, I am actually running to the airport to catch a flight. Jumping out of the shower was close though.
And of the 700 plus pr's I have written over the years, I would say I am entitled to a mistake or two. I'm only human.
I will leave the errors in for entertainment value, but thanks for posting!
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