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Old 06-25-2008, 05:42 PM  
StuartD
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Originally Posted by spacedog View Post
You spelled schedule wrong.

There should not be an ' in sells

Fix this line so it reads as "IAlien does not follow trends. We Set them."

Should also be a comma before and after however.

Finally, WTF do you mean create the "hint" of originality? Shouldn't the goal be

however, at IAlien the aim is to create an original and fresh look for each production.

or are you only "hinting"


Fix this line to read as follows
Over the years IAlien has worked with a wide variety of successful companies. Below are a few


Just trying to help.. looks great BTW
Fixing alienq spelling/grammar is a full time job. Best to just let it go now or it may consume you. There's no end to it.
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