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I agree with GeorgiaAsphault (cool header btw, nice how it looks like her hand is wrapped around it!) that it is a little cluttered...So, how do you solve that?
Well, you could increase the spacing, and play with coloring. The yellow color is used quite a bit, and it begins to "run" into each other, making it hard for your eyes to focus. Yellow is generally used as an "attention getter," so it's kinda hard for the surfer to focus.
Also, how exactly does the "number viewing" work? Better to have nothing, or some number, than 0.
Overall, I think it'll be a winner!
Are you going for any particular niche???
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