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Originally Posted by BennyX
-> 3. wow this header is perfect how do you do that? fucking nice
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Just copying and pasting portions of her body over the horizontal bar and erasing parts of the layers so the bar runs into her. Because I don't have the original files you can see the background tile is messed up. Plus the reflection isn't ideal. You should scoot her down so she's laying directly on top of the gray area, then move the reflection down so it's completely on the gray.
It would've taken too long to do without the original files. This was just to give you an idea
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Originally Posted by BennyX
-> 1. what do you mean with bunched up? witch spaces?
thx for this nice critic
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Originally Posted by mona_klixxx
...So, how do you solve that?
Well, you could increase the spacing, and play with coloring. The yellow color is used quite a bit, and it begins to "run" into each other, making it hard for your eyes to focus. Yellow is generally used as an "attention getter," so it's kinda hard for the surfer to focus.
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Very true! Right along the lines of what I was thinking! To expand a little further, you've got those 110x150 thumbnails in between the rows of the 3 larger thumbnails - put more space above and below the row of 110x150 thumbs. Maybe put them in a different colored box.
I would also put a different colored box behind the right column to separate it a bit more and put a little more spacing between below the "free hardcore" and the thumbnail below it. Maybe make the background color a dark gray and switch the text color to white. Pull the gray from one of the shapes in your background tile.
For example, look at espn.com. Though it's a 3 column layout, the far right column is black, whereas the other two (or for your site the one) columns are white and tan.
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Originally Posted by mona_klixxx
I agree with GeorgiaAsphault (cool header btw, nice how it looks like her hand is wrapped around it!) that it is a little cluttered
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Thanks