OK Time to critique...
I like your program. I like the girls... Time to let you know what I don't like...
No where in any of the tours does it say the surfer is going to get access to the entire program by joining one site. So to the average "Joe Six Pack" it looks like you charge $40 for a solo model site. Instant turn off!
The tour of the Kinky VIP site looks like I made it back in 1997. WTF? Look at
http://www.realitykings.com/ and then
http://www.pure18.com ... Notice how clean these sites look. I know your site is a solo model site and all but it can be cleaned up a lot.
In the Dakota tour you are using purple text on a purple background. It should be White text or yellow text... or anything that contrasts...
The tours don't tell me much about how kinky the girls are. Like Dakota's tour should be talking about her masturbation techniques and shit.
In the tours you often go from the girls point of view when speaking to the surfer about what they will get to the third person point of view. Some times in text right next to one another. Makes it confusing. I don't know if Dakota is talking or a reviewer is talking.. The surfer would rather it all be Dakota for fantasies sake.
The really big issue is that price though... $40 and it looks like all I am getting is one web site for that price.
I am sure you can whip something up really fast like this site has at the bottom of the page:
http://sweetdenisa.com/tour/index.php?
You would convert a hell of a lot better!
Also most trials are cheaper than the monthly price. Not more expensive.