I liked it, but thought it was too long and could have used a more heavy handed editor. I mean, it was based off a short story for christs sake, not a novel.
I liked parts of it, and I liked the themes, but there was alot that they could have cut out. Having so much in there made it a little redic and Forrest Gump-like TBH.
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