that works for me
if you ever need a proof reader for anything just hit me up on ICQ.
Honestly it gave me that "not someone else" writing it feel. Normally when I read shit like that I sit there thinking "This is some old fat guy writing about something a buddy told him about, or something he read somewhere else in his own words." With a couple of your posts, like the one about the whipped cream face fucking, I believed it.