My girlfriend is studying faculty of economics, and I went with to some of their presentation of marketing department. Some dude talking about creativity and shit, telling people to choose his department... and then he told a great story (great for me, if you don't like it gfy).
It was spring. Birds singing, sun shining, children playing, beautiful day. In some park in the corner was a blind man who was begging. In front of him was a box (for money) which was empty. In his hand was a sign where was written "I'm Blind". Some marketing guy was going to work, saw a blind man and gave him a few bucks. He was sad because of him, and he took a pen and wrote something on blinds man sign... went to work.
When he was returning from his job, he saw a blind man again, and in front of him was a box full of money...
He wroted just 3 words on blind man's sign. On his sign was: "It's spring, and I'm blind!"
Dude!!! Fucking great!!!
I hope I inspired you just a little to make a good sales text, as you see, sales text is like 50% for successful sale.
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PS. With my advertising skills, I would write - Fuck me, I'm blind - that would be great too
