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On a more serious note though, I fully agree with the statements above.
If you want people to take your website and sales serious, then you'll also have to provide some kind of user-friendly well written website.
Sure you can use the "girlish" way of formulating things to give it another "cuteness" push, but the state your website is in now, looks like something that was made on
www.kinderlines.nl
Your idea got potential, but the sales won't just come because you have written a colorful site in a few minutes.