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Originally Posted by NetHorse
I originally posted this on a censored forum..
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Wouldn't it have been easier to just eliminate the word entirely? It isn't like it enhanced the story at all. In fact, had the opposite effect as I stopped reading and starting scanning for something of interest.
All I found was. "I didn't recover from that night for like 4 days. I was sick for half a week." which came off as rather redundant.
