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Looks a bit posed rather than real sex.
Color balance is too cold.
Too many of her looking at the camera rather than enjoying herself as she's having sex.
She has a nice set of teeth but we don't need to see them so much.
The curtain fail in the back ground is off putting in the first shots.
Some tips.
Tell the models to fuck each other while you take pictures. Keep your directions to a minimum so you don't become center of attraction. If you're working with experienced boys it's easy to tell them the positions and they will move the girl around to those positions. Have a display folder with all the pictures you want to cover ready by your side and use it as a story board. It's only the position and progression that matters. Shoot the set before the video and tell the models to repeat the photo shoot on video they just did on stills.
Obviously the boys do not cum until the video shoot so you can capture it on video. Have your stills lights still in position to catch the shoots of her dripping in cum.
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