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Originally Posted by CunningStunt
Here's a refresher so you can take a new look at the same questions.
It's Saturday morning 9am in Sydney, but thanks for asking.
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Copywrite 2009
Have you even spellchecked the site? Copyright.
Stick to the same font throughout. The design looks a mess as it is, like 2002 hacked together html.
There's no clear message on what the site is all about, needs to be damn obvious to surfers the minute they land there.
This looks like another pick up artist site, but with videos to me. What's your USP? Why would people rebill? If by some miracle they actually learn how to pick up, why would they come back to view some cheesy videos - in case they forgot?
The best thing about it is the domain name.
How can you get Mastercard and Visa approval if you're bankrupt?
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still drunk from last night?
gona fix copywright soon ...
it's obvious to a lot of people. can't win everyone.
what does USP mean?
already said many times why they'd come back - new info and movies and other crap
thanks for the comment on the name - i kinda agree there too
i can't as a Canadian even get ANY processing - you have to have a US entity....anything else relating to that is private info and none of your business. Unless you want to tell me who your silent partners are and your bank account numbers?
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This dog, is dog, a dog, good dog, way dog, to dog, keep dog, an dog, idiot dog, busy dog, for dog, 20 dog, seconds dog!
Now read without the word dog.
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