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I checked out the site after reading the last few days of hype on GFY about the project. I have to give it to you - you can create a major league buzz.
1. I have no idea what it is that you are selling. How to pick up chicks? ... porn memberships? ... There is no clear messaging to warrant a sale. There is no "hook"
There is a fine line between subtle and confusing. You are seriously on the confusing side with this concept.
2. The design is amazingly weak. You will not stand out from the 1000000 other simple/clean sites out there.
Slick designs will make a surfer want to check out the tour, maybe join up. Thinking that an old school 2000ish design will cut it today in the world of the tubes is going to result in a serious disappointment.
3. Picking up babes with these really lame "signals" ... a 13 year old boy may fall for this but not a seasoned surfer that has seen every TGP/MGP/Tube/paysite/freesite out there.
4. Stock content. You have nothing original that says - I have to come here to this site to see this content. ... Why pay $30 for a membership when I can go see it for free on a variety of sites that have existed for years now.
My advice:
1. Make your sales messaging clear and well understood.
2. Get a design that really stands out.
3. Get some exclusive content.
I would advise you to rethink your entire strategy on this site.
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