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Old 01-12-2010, 04:10 PM  
Amputate Your Head
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Looks ok.

My criticisms would be:

Fill in the tiny little open spaces between some of the lettering curves with the background gold, to make it appear more solid. Those little gaps aren't really hurting anything, but they aren't helping either.

The lettering is ok, but maybe not the best. At first glance, without really looking hard at it, it looks like "Ghetto Things".

The subtitle seems like an afterthought. All the work went into the bling, and then there's that plain subtitle.

It needs some sort of a point of reference, or grounding. It's just floating there in space. Maybe a solid backing, or even a shadow would help bring it more in to reality. (which might also help with the tiny gaps in the lettering).

The internal bling seems a little over contrasty & sharp, but the "sparkles" or "glints" seem dull. There's also some jaggy edges that should be cleaned up.

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