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Old 02-06-2010, 02:44 PM  
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Originally Posted by EscortBiz View Post
a) the site does amazing conversions because the way it is setup, because we dont sound like stockbrokers because we dont sound like QVC, the whole concept of the site was to sound very "here are the facts takes it or leave it" versus "buy now, wow amazing, just look at this, dont miss out" crap.
Like I said -- a great idea, and one I wouldn't mind claiming ownership. And while I'm not expecting a hyped-up pitch, you really need to cut out the "ums" and "ahs". There's nothing wrong with being "here are the facts takes it or leave it" sounding...but some of these reviews sound like the dude just got up out of bed.

And make sure the facts are straight, too.

No one's doubting your conversion ratio at all. I'm sure it'll kick ass, and I'm glad you took the time to review my site. I just wish all the facts would have been correct.
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