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Old 03-20-2010, 08:17 PM  
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there's anatomy issues, specifically arm issues with the pharaoh and merman.

the pharaoh has his lats (back) connect mid way into his triceps. lats connect into the shoulder, shoulder into arms

The merman's right arm looks broken. It doesn't bend that way. i can see the tricep (on the top part of his arm) so looks like the head of the bicep is on bottom. the bicep would connect higher into the armpit and actually you would see the bottom of the tricep and the shoulder should be bigger and higher. That's why it seems awkward. Try that pose in the mirror, it's not physically possible. Also the merman's nipples are too high on the chest, should be lower on his chest.

but i do like the piss tube girl. some good stuff, especially the rendering. just some anatomy issues, sometimes it happens when trying to squeeze too much into an area or no model reference. i've always drawn my whole life so i appreciate the talent.
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