04-23-2010, 12:02 AM
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Living The Dream
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Join Date: Jun 2009
Location: Inside a Monitor
Posts: 19,551
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Quote:
Originally Posted by POed-poster
I think you need to omit the prepositional phrases from the ends of your last two sentences
That pretty much sums you up.
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