First One:
The main header is really kind of a mess.
It's all over the place and does not lead the eyes in any particular direction like it should.
Some of the shadowing is missing. You have shadow on some pieces, none on others. It's inconsistent.
The lack of sidewalls, internal backgrounding or proper consistent shadowing = there is no common grounding, which is a big part of what's making the header a mess and hard to follow. Everything is just kind of floating there, making it look unfinished.
And the text throughout is a little small.
Second One:
This header is better composed, and leads the eye better, but still has some bizarre flaws.
The bent over dude has his fist in the other dude's crotch. The dude with the red hat has his head going up the other dude's ass. The dude with the crotch & ass issues has a vanishing leg. Your graphic text is right up to the cutoff on the right side.
I still believe some sidewalls would improve this one too.
#2 is the better version in my opinion. (based on composition & overall graphics)
