Originally Posted by Paul Markham

Your content might be great, I'm not commenting on what's inside your site. I was talking about the clips you have that will decide if the tour works or not. The design and layout are secondary. It's clips that make conversions. And IMO the clips I saw were not giving me any incentive to pull out my card. If you're converting 1-9,000 I'm in the majority because 8,999 other people are looking at the tour and leaving.

It does not have to be fucking, but it has to give the impression the girl delivered something more than the same old tired fake porn persona the tour showed me.

I use to shoot a very similar thing to these clips back in the 80s and 90s and put them together as a sample tape. After the girls had finished her days work I would film her talking about what she had done, the fun she had and the orgasms. The scripting was minimal and this made the girl talk as herself and it showed she had had a good time.

If it's solo she can show some of the toys she used, girl/girl can be a few girls in the clip and boy girl the boy is laying behind her. With a shagged rotten look on his face or a big contented grin. You need to sell the sizzle of the scenes inside the site.

Get imaginative and deliver clips that will convert more than 1 in 9,000. Because with 100,000 hits a day you will only convert 11 a day. And keeping 100,000 coming every day is tough.