great looking video!
1st)i would take if off the join page - as others said it's distracting from clicking the join button.
2nd)i would make it 3 mins max and make some of the more lengthy "lingering shots" shorter.
3rd)i would reverse order of edits and have most or all of the cumshots at the end. start with the foreplay-masturbation clips, go to the sex-oral sex clips, then to the cumshots. last 30 seconds a succession of the best money shots...
on edit- and make those money shots even shorter for more tease factor.
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