DrFuck

Ok, so here is the top 5 of problems:

1. You have to choose a model, paysite or free (with other ads)
2. You need to get your sales pitch above the fold.
3. If you are a paysite you only need good traffic (for instance traffic-in, or buy a banner from me that converts into sales)
4. copy at least the general landing page idea from the companies that have been around longer in the business.
5. Use red and green for signup buttons (most clicked is red, green is second, but seen as a confirmatin colour)
6. ..... the list is endless, but I hope this gives you an idea.

In short I would get a nice profesional landing page design and you need to make sure you decide if you go for premium paysite or freesite model. Nothing in between.

Hope this helps

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