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Old 04-11-2011, 02:42 AM  
Paul Markham
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How much you plan on charging for it? One idea is to put chapters behind CPALEAD doorways and have them download "resources" using those pay per upload affiliate programs PIMP PIMP HOORAY!

Table of Content looks tight though
The selling price will be in the hands of the publisher and me.

However creating a site with constantly updated info and discussion is a good idea.

Babymaker, maybe some instructional videos on the site would be a great idea. Again thanks.

If the trolls didn't keep bumping with their crap I wouldn't of got these ideas.

Thanks trolls.

Cherry I have just looked at http://www.blurb.com/books/1334167

It's good amateur art/erotic. It's in no way professional and not porn. Some of your mistakes in shooting are very basic. You will need to get my Ebook to learn more.

Things like cropping are very poor.

For instance the very first picture you cut off the girls hand and in lots of shots you crop out bits that should be in the picture. Second and third picture are also badly cropped. Good amateur content, never going to sell. And not in Mayfair, it's not good enough.

Bad posing is also a problem. You're trying to play at the top table with less ability than I have.

DON"T crop off a girls toes, shave of part of her elbow or knee or head, either make a very deliberate crop or include it in. When posing girls for this kind of work accentuate something, mostly curves. Looks also are important, Sultry, Teasing, Hard, Soft, Getting Grace to go through the motions doesn't cut it.

Then there are locations, shooting a girl in the forest is cheap. Some of your locations are wrong.

Study work by guys like Micheal Ancher, Hank Londoner and others to see what it takes.

Then adapt to yourself.

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