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Originally Posted by ArsewithClass
Can I recommend something... when writing a review, don't write a review, speak it, as if speaking direct to the person.
You wouldn't say to someone "fantastic site" you would name the site.... then speak with short pause rather than long break.
i.e. "MrSkin's a fantastic site with little improvement needed, with so many scenes, with so much variety, the use of different producers giving their versions of the films kept the members area entertaining."
Oh, and theres nothing "yet still amazing" as " it is amazing to see so many well known stars naked in the same site".
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The irony of Gary giving Paul advice on copy writing is fucking hilarious. I tried to point out all of the myriad of very basic english mistakes Gary made on his site years ago and he still hasn't fixed it.
I tried to help him out
here. with very practical advice:
"GspotProductions offers 2 mega sites with leak free tours!
arsewithclass.com //southerncumsluts.com"
So, the most important thing you are selling is that your site has a leak free tour? That?s not a good idea. How about a more compelling USP? Try this:
?G-Spot Productions is proud to offer our affiliates a unique thing in adult. The personal touch. We?re pro-ams ? as you can see from the spelling mistakes LOL ? so you know that you?re really talking to us when you email. This is really us, really our site and really we care about helping you make as much money as possible.?
And now he makes sites like this:
http://chloemafiaxxxfactorporn.com/
But he was chucked out of school aged 15 and made to work in a pet shop. So...