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Old 10-06-2011, 06:27 AM  
Paul Markham
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So just finished another review, takes me a few days to get into a site and get the feel of what the owner is trying to achieve. This one has done it very well.

http://trikepatrol.com/1/

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Tour 1
Lyn ? Cunning Fairy Runt Hunt

She seems a bit reluctant once the fucking starts. Needs more of how you pick them up to make it have more affect. This gives a scene real meaning.

Don't like the music, live sound would be better.
Turn music down to background and include live sound.

Try shaving the boy a bit better, a bit to hairy.

Not bad at all, but not the best girl once the fucking starts.

Katrina

Much better, quieter and she's good.
Filming the pick up would be nice.
Sex is sex, what makes it different is often the pick up.

Katrina looks like she's enjoyed herself.

Jana and Julia ? Double Time

Good stuff.
Intro you need to prep the girls better.
These two are good, did they do more?

Got ideas for 2 girls scenes to expand on content and the themes. Later and in private.

Che (with Charm) ? Claim Staking

OK just a standard scene and though the visual is fine. The construction isn't. No intro, no sound just the music. Got to know who the girls are.

As for Tour 1.
For me too much text, not going to want to read a book. So I can jerk off.

http://trikepatrol.com/t2/
Tour 2.
Much much better, more girls and shows the amount of content you have better. Let the pictures do the talking. LOL

Got a few ideas for you only on the tour clips. Will discuss it on ICQ.

Into the site. Expecting good things based on my feeling from the tour.

Ashley: Crazy for You

Another winner here. Love the intro quirky and different not over the moon with the music. Still good.
IMO needs a reason to get her back to your room. When she gets back there, nothing much wrong with this one. Spot on.

Yen: Cock-loving Cougar

Nice intro,

Again this guy needs a razor on his balls.

Great scene and obvious why shes a favorite. She loves fucking, can't beat that.

Got a few ideas to chat with you about and they're for your ears only as this needs to be done on a one to one basis.

Get her back for a new scenario, worth another pop just for the fun of it. LOL

Maui: Philippine Dream Teen

OK real cute one. Just one thing and I'm sure you know. Don't shoot girls with a big window behind them unless you have a lot of kick ass reflectors and lights. LOL

A girl with tons of personality and it's real, Very refreshing these days. Love it so far and only 5 minutes in.

Another winner, need to get this one back as well.

Don't need to look at much more to know this is a good Amateur reality Asian girl site. But will do later, need to go by more olive oil.
A few technical points I'll help you with, nothing major as it's real amateur niche. Girls having fun as they're having sex.

What I do have to discuss with you is better ways to do the sample clips on the tours.

Ways to expand on a scene. Positions shooting etc.

And how to maximise on the best girls.

In private according to your needs and situation.

Overall I loved the site and think it would be best if the owner gives me a 6 month pass, as I will need to check in at least once a day to keep the feel of the site.
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