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Old 06-08-2003, 04:23 AM  
cheekycherry
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Dude, the whole thing needs rewriting...

It doesn't do anything to "sell" to me and even though I am fully versed in how affiliate programs work, it seems I am left confused wondering exactly what your program does.

The English sucks and it really does not sell it to me at all.

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I mean WTF? You had someone English read that?!? Was he 13 years old?

You say here that your program does everything all of the good affiliate scripts do, but then why doesn't it tell me that on the sales pages?

Where are the bulleted features/benefits?

Where is the catchy headline to drag me in?

High quality sales letters are the most important part of selling non-adult products online and you simply CANNOT get this part wrong. If you do, you are losing money!
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