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I love rap and freestyles. You've got a few problems though
a) You only ever rhyme monosyllables. That's easy. Anyone can do that.
b) Often you forget to even rhyme the fucking monosyllable
c) You speak utter gibberish, most freestyles make sense, you just go on about chickens, space cats, wallpaper and whatever else is in your heard
d) your flow is wack. possibly if there was a degree of anything interesting going percussively you might get away with mumbling shite that doesn't rhyme, but you don't
e) No one can understand the words you are saying because you got no teeth and rap like you've got a deck of cards in your mouth
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