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Originally Posted by shimmy2
simple > complex
i understand your need for cutting edge shit design wise but content is king. where is ________ when you need him
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I'm here.
Nice flash design. Stick to design because for porn you lack a lot.
Content is awful, it simply won't convert. You don't have enough. The girl is average. Your shooting is amateur trying to do something he can't (see Cherry for instructions on that)
KISS
Keep It Sweet & Simple.
Shoot the girl getting down and dirty in an amateur girl next door way. concentrate on video. Keep her away from viewing porn as it will give her ideas and you want her to be herself, not a plastic porn girl. She talks, strips masturbates and shares it all with you,
with you face behind the camera. Then the viewer gets the benefit of the performance thinking she's doing it for him.
If she's shy, let her be shy. If she masturbates and climaxes for real, the shyness will go. If she's a "Slut on steroids" have condoms ready in your pocket. These girls tend to want a fuck after they jerk off in front of you. In other words, let her be herself to her maximum and give a genuine performance.
Don't try to do anything fancy other than record her being who she is. Don't try to push her into a box she doesn't fit.
As for what you have done. Bin it and start again.
My advice is free, if you want the sugar coated version Paypal the money.
Seriously hit me up on ICQ or Skype and I'll give you a copy of my E book "Learn to Shoot Porn. It's all about porn and not a lot about photography.