Well one thing I see is on the page with the Big image, above the image you have a link to your own site.. Not needed. A link to the site you are selling is needed more.
So replace that.
also the name of your site is Boobs Journal but I dont see much of a journal. Might want to add some text to each post.
also might want to consider finding a way to separate each post better. right now they all seem run together.
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