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Old 01-23-2012, 07:49 AM  
B.Barnato
So Fucking Banned
 
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Originally Posted by raymor View Post
You might double your revenue from the book with some good editing. You may or may not know much about traffic but your English could really use some work. All of those commas, for example. Your post has fifteen commas when it should have none. All fifteen are wrong. Commas are used to set off non-essential parts of a sentence. In other words, by using a comma you are saying the sentence works still be complete without that part.


Wait - Hotbot? Your example of a search engine is Hotbot? So this was written in 1997?
I will still make some edits, however some of my comma use is correct I am sure of it.

Will think over some points you made. Thanks for the input.
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