Originally Posted by Paul Markham

Your sites are a lot better than most I've seen. My complaint is most are written by a a script and only to impress a spider from Google. Yours are written a lt better.

These ares a good start, hit me up to discuss taking it to the next level.



OK not bad, the number of comments shows it's not working as well as it should. So lets accept some is good and look at the weak spots.

The annoying flashing banner on the right hand side of the blog was putting me off reading the text. The white background is too bright, it doesn't read like a story. There's no follow up story to read further down the page. Plus some of the links go to 404 or Hentai pages. It's still too impersonal in it's writing.

Compare this with a blog by a news reporter, columnist or critic. To see where I'm going. They build a blog to keep people coming back, yours need to get to the next level and still sell to make you money.

Hit me up and we can chat. I'm not sharing with every bloody no hoper here and have 500 copies in a few days.