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Originally Posted by Tsharp23
I really like your site, good job.
However as a few other have said.. I would recommend that you make the site a little simpler.
The affiliate site looks as though there is way too much information in one area. You need to simplify it to grab a potential affiliate's attention.. otherwise they may just glance at your paragraphs and decide that its too much of a hassle to read.
If you have the funds you may want to think about investing in a copywriter which shouldn't be too expensive. You need to be able to GRAB attention and keep it
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Thank you very much for all the tips, our friend.
Well, the texts on OprnLoveCash were our first try to at least have some program page and put the main features of our program out to the world. We are aware that it needs shortening, and improvementa. I am glad to hear it from you and will work at the OpenLoveCash site as soon as I finish the custom tools for promisin affiliates and get through the regular update work before weekend. I will let u know by begining of next week to ask if you think it looks better.
Btw.would like to improve our own writting as the funds can always be used otherwise
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