You have a bottom horizontal scrollbar on that page. That is not very professional at all. The design is not bad or ugly but it is not really top-notch adult design. The big square graphic in the frame and the simple oval gradient buttons are pretty basic design elements. In the left frame, the image stops about 2 inches from the bottom of the page and leaves a big empty white block. Not something most people would want to pay for, I think.
I don't have any affiliation with Ketadream but I think he's right about this: you need more polishing to play in the big leagues. Go check out some of the portfolios you'll find around here and you'll see what you're up against.
SpaceAce