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Having the cams logo and the sites logo one on top of the other is just gay... Don't do that.
Latest video updates - movie duration and update date have too much spacing... looks unconnected. Disjointed...
On home page look at recently added models... that is much better spacing for the meta data...
In the what is OT? spot you have:
"You won't find blatant nudity or in-your-face genitalia like you can on other adult sites."
Don't use the word CAN! Who ever wrote your copy sucks ass... Change can to do, or will.
Again:
"What you will find is beautiful women waiting to tempt and tease you."
You don't use is because that is singular... You use are because they will find multiple beautiful women...
"What you will find are beautiful women waiting to tempt and tease you."
If you don't like how it rolls off of the tongue you have to rewrite the entire thing.
In that sentence you mentioned women and then start the next sentence with "The girls..." which is confusing... Are they women or girls?
The rest of the paragraph just goes to complete shit. Especially the ending sentence...
Don't even get me started on the second paragraph.
I don't mind the social buttons so big next to that text.. But the descriptive text could be bolder and better spaced to fill up more space...
The social at the bottom need the text to be moved down to match the perceived top of the social buttons.
The video kinda sucks... reminds me of clips that were just thrown together... where is the tease the text talked about?
Join page: I would switch up the text under the site pics to be read from one to the next so:
Join OnlyAllSites For Unlimited Access... | Or, Join OnlyTease + OnlyMelanie & OnlyCarla Too!
Then your click icons will all lineup and no longer look disjointed.
And... Now send me a pass to vrocks at gmail so I can spank it!
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