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Originally Posted by Buff
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*worst not "worse"
*hearts' content not "hearts content"
*for religions not "of religions"
*"In the guise of selling you a ticket to a place that's a myth." is a fragment. get rid of the period after "steal" and make the "I" in "In" lowercase to combine the two sentences into one good sentence.
*a "con" is a trick already. You shouldn't add redundancy.
You're right about religion, but you're also a self-important twit. No offense.
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No offense taken.
I allways like too be remind of how far this twit gets in life. Especiolly when I sse much clever guys here who diddn't do so well.
shouldn't it be Heart's Content not "hearts' content"?