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"We offer you only beautiful teens with breath taking natural big boobs. The kind of girl that you see on the street and never forget."
"girl" in this case should be "girls". In the first sentance you're talking about "teens", why in second have the singular?
Also, it's the "kind of girls WHO you see..."
"Exhibiting their perfect shaped body just for you guys"
That's not a sentence. Should be:
"You now have the chance to see them here, exhibiting their perfect shaped body just for you guys."
"perfect shaped body"-> "PERFECTLY shaped BODIES
"Feel the girlfriend experience, have a sneak peek into their personal lives."
AND have a sneak peek etc., or just make that two sentences.
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