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Purely from a design standpoint, you need some contrast. I can't immediately decipher where the navigation is, content, what is adspace, etc and this gives your usability a black eye. Try giving certain divs and headings a slight variant in background coloring and make your navigation readily apparent and consistent on each page of your site.
Also, my personal opinion as an avid porn browser - downsize your text, unless you are shooting for a more narrative experience. However, it seems like the majority of your text is a sales pitch, which I would answer with - let your content sell itself - if you have good content, don't try to sell it with words people may or may not read, just show your awesome content. Text is good for onsite SEO, but even if someone finds your site in the SERPs, chances are they'll bounce immediately because they are looking for something to arouse them NOW and not read an ass load. So keep the text, but make it smaller and less dominant, and add more visual stimulation(photos, screen shots, etc.).
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