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Old 02-07-2014, 01:50 PM  
deltav
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Originally Posted by plsureking View Post
Hey Deltav - I understand where you are coming from, but my pitch is not negative. Its factual. What's wrong with pointing out the issues with my competitor's products? There are many lol
Sorry, it is by definition "negative". You spent more time talking down your competitor's product than you did talking up your own. Whether it's "factual" or not is a different thing entirely.

Far as the website's sales pitch, sure, market to whomever however you want. I was just giving my impressions as a prospective buyer. I think there could be a middle ground between the "You Too Can Make Money In Porn" pitch you have and a more professional approach, or at least change the testimonial & customer links to sites that are more polished.
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