Thread: I Comtrolled My Gun...One Split Second Would Have Changed Everything
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Old 06-03-2015, 03:05 PM  
baddog
So Fucking Banned
 
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For a writer, your spelling and punctuation are terrible. Proper punctuation would make your story easier to read. $.02
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