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If we're talking about the death of the corporation, why is all the transitional imagery big, stark city skylines and bustling traffic? Why wouldn't you show small a corner mom and pop store; something fun like a candy shop, maybe with the happy owner making warm contact with a regular customer, getting an internet order and hand-writing a thank you note to put in the shipping container?
And why are all the monologues from men - most of whom aren't even attractive? Rule number one of mainstream marketing is, Put a pretty girl on the cover.
And ditto, what everyone else said about the music, lack of smiles, and paradigm shifts.
Re-shoot. But first, think about it. Your budget should have little to do with your thought process.
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